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content/blog/arti_030_released/contents.lr

@@ -34,14 +34,14 @@ of [clock skew], when that affects bootstrapping.  (This is a feature
 we've wanted in Tor for a long time.)
 
 We also add support for C tor-style "[safe logging]" (suppressing
-sensitive client from persistent logs).
+sensitive client information from persistent logs).
 
 For developers, we've continued to improve our configuration API and
 make it more consistent.  This involves a fair amount of breakage; we
 hope that next release will only have minor API breaks in the
 configuration logic.
 
-There are also a **bunch** of smaller features, bugfixes, and
+There are also a bunch of smaller features, bugfixes, and
 infrastructure improvements; again, see the [CHANGELOG] for a more
 complete list.