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@@ -97,19 +97,20 @@ Changes in version 0.2.2.1-alpha - 2009-08-26
       via application-level web tricks.
 
   o Packaging changes:
-    - Upgrade Vidalia to 0.2.3 from 0.1.15.  See
+    - Upgrade Vidalia from 0.1.15 to 0.2.3 in the Windows and OS X
+      installer bundles. See
       https://trac.vidalia-project.net/browser/vidalia/tags/vidalia-0.2.3/CHANGELOG
       for details of what's new in Vidalia 0.2.3.
-    - Windows Vidalia Bundle: update Privoxy to 3.0.14-beta from 3.0.6
-    - OS X Vidalia Bundle: replace Privoxy with Polipo 1.0.4 plus Tor
-      specific configuration
+    - Windows Vidalia Bundle: update Privoxy from 3.0.6 to 3.0.14-beta.
+    - OS X Vidalia Bundle: move to Polipo 1.0.4 with Tor specific
+      configuration file, rather than the old Privoxy.
     - OS X Vidalia Bundle: Vidalia, Tor, and Polipo are compiled as
       x86-only for better compatibility with OS X 10.6, aka Snow Leopard.
     - OS X Tor Expert Bundle: Tor is compiled as x86-only for
       better compatibility with OS X 10.6, aka Snow Leopard.
     - OS X Vidalia Bundle: The multi-package installer is now replaced
       by a simple drag and drop to the /Applications folder. This change
-      occured with the upgrade to Vidalia 0.2.3.
+      occurred with the upgrade to Vidalia 0.2.3.
 
 
 Changes in version 0.2.1.20 - 2009-??-??