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 ## Q2 2022 OKRs
 
-### O1: Race (sponsor 28) is happy with Tor
+### O1: RACE (sponsor 28) is happy with Tor
 
  KR1: (minimal result) We have a good bullet-point outline of all the topics and tasks that need to be considered for Salmon.
  
  KR2: (better result) Each piece of this outline is fleshed out in enough detail that it provides a coherent narrative and helps the reader understand missing or unsolved pieces.
 
  KR3: We completed every requested presentation.
-   * Funder learns more details about Tor activities (March site visit)
-   * Other groups funded alongside us learn about our tech transition wishlist and our internet freedom funding landscape experience (April presentation)
-   * Funder understands and appreciates the above Salmon topics (April ECP-status presentation)
-   * Tor has presented at PI meeting about RACE work since December (May presentation)
+   * Funder learned more details about Tor activities (March site visit)
+   * Other groups funded alongside us learned about our tech transition wishlist and our internet freedom funding landscape experience (April presentation)
+   * Funder understood and appreciates the above Salmon topics (April ECP presentation)
+   * Tor presented at PI meeting about RACE work since December (May presentation)
 
- KR4: Money machine is well prepared to contract-manage the s28 contract
+ KR4: Money machine is well prepared to contract-manage the s28 contract.
    * We successfully handed off report management, and presentation info gathering, to Gaba and Bekeela.
    * We coordinated with Gaba whenever there were new task requests from sponsor.
 
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  KR1: My PETS research paper assignments get reviewed and have a decision.
 
- KR2: PETS has diverse attendees because stipends get allocated well.
+ KR2: PETS is on track to have diverse attendees because stipends got allocated well.
 
  KR3: PETS has a publisher for its research papers in 2022 and beyond.