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  KR1: (minimal result) We have a good bullet-point outline of all the topics and tasks that need to be considered for Salmon.
  
- KR2: (better result) Each piece of this outline is fleshed out in enough detail that it provides a coherent narrative that helps the reader understand missing or unsolved pieces.
+ KR2: (better result) Each piece of this outline is fleshed out in enough detail that it provides a coherent narrative and helps the reader understand missing or unsolved pieces.
 
  KR3: We completed every requested presentation.
    * Funder learns more details about Tor activities (March site visit)
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    * Tor has presented at PI meeting about RACE work since December (May presentation)
 
  KR4: Money machine is well prepared to contract-manage the s28 contract
-   * We successfully handed off report management, and presentation info gathering, to Gaba and Bekeela
-   * We coordinated with Gaba whenever there were new task requests from sponsor
+   * We successfully handed off report management, and presentation info gathering, to Gaba and Bekeela.
+   * We coordinated with Gaba whenever there were new task requests from sponsor.
 
 ### O2: The Tor network still functions
 
- KR1: moria1 has been stable and available throughout the period
+ KR1: moria1 has been stable and available throughout the period.
 
  KR2: We have noticed and handled every major attack/stability issue on the network.
 
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 ### O4: Our external relationships feel appreciated
 
- KR1: PleasrDAO receives the dusk v2 onion key.
+ KR1: PleasrDAO received the dusk v2 onion key.
 
  KR2: I submitted a detailed outline for a Defcon talk (April).
 
- KR3: Ola's trial has a Tor expert witness (May).
+ KR3: Ola's trial had a Tor expert witness (May).
 
  KR4: I networked with security researchers at the NSF PI meeting (June).
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