howto/ldap.md

@@ -82,11 +82,11 @@ double-signing the email and sending it in clear text (instead of HTML):
 
 However you sent your signed email, the daemon will then respond with a new
 randomized password encrypted with your key. You can then use the [update
-form](https://db.torproject.org/login.html) whit your new password to change
-your password to a strong password in the "Change password" field you can
-remember or (preferably) a stronger password stored in your password manager.
-Note: on that login page the button you should use to login is, unintuitively,
-labeled "Update my info"
+form](https://db.torproject.org/login.html) with your new password to change
+your it to a strong password, in the "Change password" field, that you can
+remember or (preferably) a stronger password (longer and more random) stored in
+your password manager. Note: on that "update form" login page the button you
+should use to login is, unintuitively, labeled "Update my info"
 
 You cannot set a new password via the mail gateway.