Those basically worked, but I figured I would reword some of it. In
particular, @smith had the first step (that seemed obvious, but is
good to add explicitely anyway) of actually logging in first.

Then I also split out the "edit info" button which was all in one long
paragraph before (complete with a "lick" instead of "click" typo).

I also made it more explicit how to "add a new address" if we're in
that state, although I'm still not fully clear what happens in that
situation.

Other changes are stylistic and typos, mostly.

See tpo/tpa/team#41183

service/email.md

@@ -108,12 +108,15 @@ edit email address" in Apple Mail, so not all hope is lost yet?
 
 ## Gmail configuration
 
-**NOTE**: This section explains how to reconfigure a gmail account that
-is _already_ configured to use a torproject.org address.  If you need to add
-a new address from scratch, the process will be a little different.
+**NOTE**: This section explains how to reconfigure a gmail account
+that is _already_ configured to use a `torproject.org` address.  If
+you need to add a new address from scratch, the process will be a
+little different.
 
- 1. Click on "Settings".  (That should be the big gear icon towards
-    thetop right of your window.)
+ 1. log into your Gmail account in a web browser
+
+ 2. Click on "Settings", that should be the big gear icon towards
+    the top right of your window
 
  2. A "quick settings" menu should open.  Click on the "See all
     settings" button at the top of that menu.
@@ -122,11 +125,11 @@ a new address from scratch, the process will be a little different.
     and Import" tab at the top of the page.
 
  4. Under "Send mail as", find the address for
-    <yourname@torproject.org>, and lick the "edit info" link to the
-    right of that account. (If the address isn't there, then your
-    gmail account isn't set up to use your TPO account. You'll need to
-    click "Add another email address" instead, and the process below
-    will be slightly different.)
+    <yourname@torproject.org>, if the address is not there, click "Add
+    another email address" and first add an email address, then return
+    here
+    
+ 5. Click the "edit info" link to the right of that account
 
  5. A new "Edit email address" popup should open.  Click "Next step" on it.
 
@@ -141,8 +144,8 @@ a new address from scratch, the process will be a little different.
     - Select "Use TLS", not "Use SSL".
 
 Double-check everything, then click "Save Changes".  Gmail will try
-authenticating to the SMTP server; if it's successful, then the popup window
-will close and your account will be updated.
+authenticating to the SMTP server; if it's successful, then the popup
+window will close and your account will be updated.
 
 # How-to