service/vault.md

@@ -21,44 +21,50 @@ You're receiving this email because you manage some credentials for
 Tor.
 
 You need to read these instructions carefully -- there are *two*
-important actions detailed here that are required for your Vaultwarden account
-to work fully.
+important actions detailed here that are required for your Vaultwarden
+account to work fully.
 
-### Getting Started
+## Getting Started
 
-You'll soon receive two emails from Vaultwarden `<noreply@torproject.org>`:
+You'll soon receive an email from Vaultwarden `<noreply@torproject.org>`
+with the subject, "Join The Tor Project". Please click the link in the
+email to create your account.
 
-- An invitation to create an account.
-- An invitation to join your team's "Organization."
-
-You **only need to click the link in the second email** (team
-invitation). This link will let you both create your account and join
-your team.
+After deciding on a password, you will be sent a verification code to
+your email address, please obtain that code and provide it to login for
+the first time.
 
 ### Critical Steps (must be completed)
 
 1. **Set up Two-Factor Authentication (2FA)** immediately after creating
-your account. Full functionality will not be available without 2FA.
+your account. Full functionality will not be available without 2FA. Go
+to Settings->Security->Two-step login to set this up.
 
-2. **Send me your account’s Fingerprint Phrase securely** (found under
-your account settings). Without this step, your account will remain
-limited, and you should not add credentials yet.
+2. **Send me your account’s Fingerprint Phrase in a secure way**. You
+can find this under Settings->My Account, there you will find "Your
+account's fingerprint phrase". Without this step, your account will
+remain limited.
 
-Once confirmed, you'll receive another email titled **"Invitation to The
-Tor Project confirmed."**
+Once I have received that fingerprint phrase, I will "confirm" your
+account. Until I have done that, you will not be able to view or add any
+passwords. Once confirmed, you'll receive another email titled
+**"Invitation to The Tor Project confirmed."**
 
-## How to use
+## How to use the vault
 
-You can interact with Vaultwarden using various client tools. The web
-interface that you have used to setup your account is not the most
-useful way to use this tool!
+Vaultwarden is our self-hosted server version of Bitwarden. You can use
+any Bitwarden client to interact with the vault. Available clients are
+here: https://bitwarden.com/download/
 
-The web extension is recommended as the primary method because it is
-most extensively audited for security and offers ease of use. Other
-client tools, including desktop applications, are also available. Choose
-the client that best suits your needs and workflow.
+You can interact with Vaultwarden using https://vault.torproject.org,
+but the web interface that you have used to setup your account is not
+the most useful way to use this tool!
 
-Available clients are here: https://bitwarden.com/download/
+The web extension (which you can find at https://bitwarden.com/download)
+is recommended as the primary method because it is most extensively
+audited for security and offers ease of use. Other client tools,
+including desktop applications, are also available. Choose the client
+that best suits your needs and workflow.
 
 To use one of these clients, simply configure it to use the self-hosted
 server, and put https://vault.torproject.org as the location.
@@ -95,7 +101,6 @@ Create new Folders or Collections using the **"New"** button.
 - [Folders](https://bitwarden.com/help/folders/)
 - [Collections](https://bitwarden.com/help/about-collections/)
 
-
 # How-to
 
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