improve onion service tb-manual page
I just did a clean-up of the onion service page in the tb-manual:
https://tb-manual.torproject.org/onion-services/
But three issues remain on that page and could use some more help:
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We devote a good chunk of the page to onion service authentication, which I would think is a real edge case. Most users never see that or think about it. Should we move it to the bottom and mark it as an 'advanced situation' or something?
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Our advice if the onion service is gone is to try again later. That's probably bad advice, since probably the story is that the onion service has been gone for years and you are clicking on a thing that will never work. Are we comfortable saying that if it's gone it's probably just gone and you should move on?
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We have this awkward phrase "onion site versions of websites" which might be exactly what our style guide tells us to say, or maybe we can simplify to the smoother "onion versions of websites"? I don't remember what our style guide suggests.
There is also a fourth issue we could consider addressing, support#236, which suggests that we document the magic securedrop names too.