"I can’t connect to Tor Browser. Is my network censored?" entry is redundant?
Please have a review of grammar:
In the sentence: "I can’t connect to Tor Browser, is my network censored?" in the article with same name does not sound nature, as it is the Tor Browser connect to the Tor network, not user connect to the Tor Browser.
[Edit from Roger: more broadly, this whole entry is redundant with https://tb-manual.torproject.org/circumvention/, which does it better. Can we just remove this entry? Or do we need a tiny placeholder to steer people to the tb-manual page?]
Edited by Roger Dingledine